Sticks and stones

This is a vast improvement for you.  The face and particularly the shoulders shoulders are very good.  The left of the torso where it joins the arm though should be more arched outward instead of flat and curved inwards if that makes any sense at all.  I love how the hair flows over one shoulder, it feels quite natural and fluid.  The shoulder blades also turned out very well.  The right under arm where it joins the torso should join a little bit lower on the body  and should be a little wider.  At the moment it looks almost like the forearm is wider than the upper arm.  The other criticism i would have is with the butt.  This is something that's very difficult to do, i still have trouble with it myself actually.  The hip shape is very good and thats a perfect start.  The part thats off is where the two butt cheeks meet,  The shape should almost resemble an upside down heart where the tip of the heart is at the spine.  If any of that makes sense or needs clarification, let me know and i gladly will do so.  This is a phenomenal piece from you and I'm glad to see you posting again.  Hope to talk to ya soon and keep it up!